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China Mackenzie « Thread Started on May 8, 2009, 5:54pm »
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CHARACTER INFO: Name: China Mackenzie Age: 16 Birthdate: 20 september 1975 Year in School: Junior Type: Witch Powers: hydrokinesis, Invisibility Affiliation: Good
DESCRIPTION: Physical Description: China stands at 5 foot 5, she has long light brown hair that flows down her back straight unless she has curled her hair she also has sun bleached streaks down her hair but it only shows in her fringe and one streak down her back, she has the Mackenzie button nose which all her family have and have had in the past, her eyes are honey brown but change with her attitude, if she is sad they become dull and dark, if she is planning something or happy they become hazel and she gets blue flakes in her eyes if she is confused. Her facial features are soft and her eyes are almond shaped, her skin is baby bottom smooth she is always being stroked by her family because her skin is soft but it turns out she is the only one in her family with really smooth skin, she has a really curvy body and she uses her body to her advantage to get anything she wants and she uses her breasts to her advantage aswell because she has an astonishing 30DD. Style: China is the sort of girl to love frills and tassles, if she has clothes that don't have frills and tassles she gives them to her sisters or chucks them, she also loves accessories whether they be bangles, her long sleek light cream scarves or her dolphin necklace, she loves colour if it's not bright and colourful than it's not in her wardrobe, she also loves boots whether they be up to her thigh or ankle. Looks Like: Autumn Reeser
Personality: China is one of the most girly-girls you will find if she's not talking about shopping, she's talking about boys, she loves to talk, she is a happy go lucky person she is always up for a challenge, she may seem like she is an angel but she has always had a mischeivous side to her she loves to stir up trouble she also loves to spread rumours because people never think it's her, the one true thing she believes in is family she thinks family should stick together through what ever trouble they go through.
she is'nt evil she just gets so bored she needs something to do so she spreads rumours but she only does it to her friends if they have had a fight, her bad girl side always makes her decisions so she never makes any good ones, she has not done much good in her life, she loves to make boys beg and plead before she even decides to go out with them, she is also quite controlling and likes to know where her boyfriend is because she getys scared he go's out to snog another girl. she can get paranoid at times but not that often only times like when her mother sent her to a mortal school for a week because she found something bad in her bag, she started to hyperventilate in one of her classes and almost died but that only happens occaisonally now, she seems laid back when she is your friend but if you get really close she starts to get annoying, but she only does it because she wants her friends to be safe.
SCHOOL LIFE: Classes taking: ➺ English / Lit III ➺ History of Magic III ➺ Magical Ethics III ➺ Potion Making III ➺ Vanquishing III ➺ Hydrokinesis III ➺ Invisibility III
Favorite Class: hydrokinesis Least Favorite Class: history of magic Subject Best At: invisibility Subject Worst At: potion making Length of Time at Magic School: All her life, 16 years
History: China Sydney Mackenzie was born on the 20th of may 1975 to michael and maddison Mackenzie, both her parents were magical so she grew up in an all-magical family. Both Michael and Maddie attended magic school that is how they met, they fell in love and started dating when they were 16 and they got married iwhen they both turned 19, they both got jobs as vets because as they were going through magic school they both also took classes in vetinary science and both earn qiute good money, in 1975 3 years after getting married they said hello to their oldest daughter and youngest nephew who were both born on the same day,their daughter China Sydney Mackenzie but only 2 years after she got siblings.
Mike and Maddie thought about how to get China to magic school because they were both alabama born but they lived with relatives in san francisco but they got lucky because China's white lighter told them he would take her and any other children they had so he also took Michaels nephew Riley who was 4 and his other nephew Ross who was 2 and both already learning their powers So he took the four young ones to magic school and after that they were glad he came.
2 years after China was born she was blessed with 2 younger sisters named Garnet Melissa Mackenzie and Angel Amberly Mackenzie, Garnet has always been the bad twin she likes to cause trouble and stir things up she is the complete opposite of Angel, Angel was the golden child being youngest, sweetest and most caring was good for her.
China has always had a rocky relationship with her parents because she thinks they don't know how she feels being a teenager she is having trouble with love, so many new technologies, temptations at school and having not so many friends she thinks they should stop interfering in her life, but somewhere deep inside she knows they do it to protect her.
On her first day China did'nt make any friends because she only trusted family even though she was very young she still understood what family meant, but later on in life she made a few good friends that were like family, she was always good at controlling her water powers and doused people who were horrible to her or her family and friends and then she turned invisible and gave them a small beating but only gave them black eyes and broken fingers but if they did something downright vicious she will get down to breaking limbs and battering people but she is getting help for it.
she is good at her hydrokinesis class and her invisibility class but she can't handle history of magic and potions they are not her strong points she does not do well with potions she does'nt listen and normally makes a potion that explodes in her face and she thinks that history of magic is boring because it not the past it's the now and the teacher does not help he has the most boring voice and it stays monotone which most students fall asleep to.
Any Extra Information: Angel and her sisters and cousins all get to magic school with the help of their white lighter.
SAMPLE WRITING: Angel was just about to get to sleep again when she was rudely awakened by Garnet making China's pot plants keep falling on her and tickling her with their roots"ALRIGHT GARNET i am getting up" while trying to put on a yellow summer dress and putting her plants back on her window sill for them to catch the sunlight, the good thing about garnet was that she put things back even if they're plants.
She ran down the stairs just to fall into her cousin Lucas "you know we all thought you were gonna be late but obviously i won the bet"she playfully slapped him and grabbed his hand ran to find her white lighter waiting for her with a stern look plastered on his face but his mouth kept twitching like he was trying not to smile"China I thought i was going to have to leave you i had to get Lucas to get you" and with that they all left waving at their parents.
They all orbed into magic school just as the bell went China dragged lucas to their Magical ethics class which he did not like at all, he thought the teacher was out to get him"MACKENZIES you are both late you get detention after school", as they walked into the classroom mr piper's eye started twitching, he practically growled and shouted at the same time, Lucas whispering "told ya he wants to get me now he's out for you"and they started listening after this.
Both Lucas and China went to their detention after china told her sisters to tell joe and their parents they were going to be late home,when they walked into the detention china started squeezind lucas's hand because she was scared of most of the people in the classroom because they were all strong, scary and stupid but they just sat up front and stayed near the teacher so no one would say anything to them, luckily their plan worked and they got out early for good behaviour.
« Last Edit: May 24, 2009, 3:57am by crimsoncatburglar »
Re: China Mackenzie « Reply #1 on Oct 13, 2009, 12:08pm »
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firstly, welcome to cms, and sorry about the wait! we are in discussions on how to get things up and running again. please use the proper format. copy and paste the code from this post. it is at the bottom. keep the code the same, and fill in your information. autumn reeser looks much older than 16 years old. please pick another pb, or make her older (young adult). also, please add a photo of your pb to the application. you need at least three paragraphs (6-10 sentences each) in the personality section. you have not even a complete sentence. her personality is pretty good. touch on some strengths, weaknesses, likes, and dislikes, as well. there were no classes on veterinary science in magic school, so her parents could not have taken these classes while they were there. they could have graduated from magic school (when they were 17-19), and then attended veterinary school out in the non-magical world, and then become vets. you say she has the ability to beat people who mess with her family, please talk about this in her personality as well. this is a trait, and something she can do, and would be part of her personality. try to expand a bit more on the history, talk more about her life. this establishes everything that has happened to her before she enters the game. make these edits, and we'll take a look again! WELCOME!
Re: China Mackenzie « Reply #2 on Nov 2, 2009, 9:19pm »
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This application has been rejected, due to not being edited according to what was asked. If you wish to reapply, you can use the new application form, and post it. We'll take a look then.
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