Alex Tryfonos

[awesomealex]

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APEEKBEHINDTHEMAGIC
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NAME ! Alex Tryfonos
AGE ! 13
PREFERED CONTACT METHOD ! pm
OTHER CHARACTERS PLAYED ! None

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WANNAGETTOKNOWME
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FULL NAME ! Alex Tryfonos
NICKNAME(S) ! Owl
AGE ! 13
DATE OF BIRTH ! 1978
GRADE ! freshman
RACE ! witch
AFFILIATION ! good

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ATASTEOFYOURWITCHCRAFT
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POWERS !

FIRST MANIFESTATION !

PROFICIENCY !

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MIRRORMIRRORONTHEWALL
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OVERALL APPEARANCE !

FACIAL FEATURES !

STYLE !

PLAYBY ! joe mcelderry

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ONTHEOUTSIDELOOKINGIN
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LIKES !

DISLIKES !

STRENGTHS !

WEAKNESSES !

GOAL !

FEAR !

SECRET !

HAPPIEST MEMORY !

WORST MEMORY !

OVERALL PERSONALITY !

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IT'SALLSPELLSANDPOTIONS
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CLASSES TAKING !

• English / Lit [I-IV]
  
• History of Magic [I-IV]
  
• Magical Ethics [I-IV]
  
• Potion Making [I-IV]
  
• Vanquishing [I-IV]
  
• [temporal stasis] [I-IV]
  
• [molecular combustion.] [I-IV]
  

FAVOURITE CLASS !

LEAST FAVOURITE CLASS !

SUBJECT BEST AT !

SUBJECT WORST AT !

TIME AT MAGIC SCHOOL !

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I'MGONNACALLTHISHOME
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HOMETOWN !
MOTHER ! Rose, 37, witch , molecular combustion.
FATHER ! Pearce , 47 ,witch , temporal stasis.
SIBLINGS ! None
SPOUSE ! None
CHILDREN ! Ruby,Witch,2,Defection-Levitation (became witch after Alex adopted her on the run)
OTHER SIGNIFICANT FAMILY ! None

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I'LLTELLYOUMYSTORY
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Alex lived in an extremely big manor in America. Alex loved that house and he said he would never leave. He grew up with his to parents-Rose and Pearce. Alex never knew his parents were witches even though he would stay reading and watching shows about witches! Alex was a very shy boy when he was young. He would never say what he really wanted to say unless he was talking to his mum and dad!
Alex was in his room reading a book-charmed and dangerous. But on that horrid day a disastrous thing happen-HIS PARENTS WERE KILLED. Alex knew how his parents were killed but never said a word to the police. The only thing he said was “I was reading a book and I heard them scream” Alex has been on the run ever since it happened.
Alex just started magic school.
Alex had no friends when he was younger. He never had any friends until he went magic school apart from ruby!
Alex was a black belt in karate and had great experience in fighting people! Alex wouldn’t let anything slip his mind he would always think carefully. Alex was a champion dancer he won 14 medals/ribbons for his dancing! Alex was a first class artist he won awards and had his art work put up!
Although Alex loved being a witch he had no control. Alex was always scared in case he hurt some but Alex has progressed from the two years on the run with his powers! Alex wasn’t very good at fighting the police since he didn’t want to hurt the people that helped society so he just stunned them and ran!
Alex trained his magic and spells since he wanted to gain control so he did not hurt ruby! Alex would also read books and spell books about witches that he found.

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ANDALLTHINGSMUSTEND
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The alarm went off on his phone singing wake up wake up. Alex was too tired but he knew today was the big Saturday family fun day and he did not want to disappoint his parents. Alex walked into the kitchen and saw the dreary look on his parents face. “I am so sorry honey but we not going on our family fun day, were so sorry!” said Rose with a crushing look on her face. Alex quietly said its ok and walked away. He went to his grand bedroom and went into the luxury bathroom and started to wash his face and brushed his teeth. He then jumped on his double bed with the cotton duvet.
(New paragraph)Alex started reading the third book of charmed and dangerous when all of a sudden he heard a horrible crash.
Alex peered out his bedroom door and started listening to a conversation! “Where’s the boy?” a hideous man asked with a fire ball in his hands. “We will never give him to you as long as we live!” said Pearce. “That can be arranged” said the second. They both had fireballs in their hands. Pearce froze them then Rose blew them up! Alex was frightened then to men appeared behind them in smoke and stabbed some sharp claws in to Rose and Pearce. Alex gasped and the two men went after him and waved his hands in fright then froze them then blew them up.
The police came bursting in when they saw Alex crying over his 2 dead parents! They asked him what happened but Alex said he didn’t know and he walked out of his bedroom and saw them lying there!
After the police had left and they had their funeral Alex went on the run and hiding away from anyone that wanted to find him. Alex faced many demons but as he started his new life as a runner he came across a baby who was being tested on!
Alex broke out the baby and named it Ruby. Then they had their first hug and ruby got 2 new powers.
(2 years later: Alex is now 13) “What is this place?”
“Magic school dear” said a lady. And Alex cunningly walked in with ruby in his arms!

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[Leilani Mahala]

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• Welcome to Magic School!
  
• Sadly, we've just undergone a new bio format, and since your application was posted after the new bio format was posted, you'll need to fill out the new application. You can find it here. You can copy and paste from this application to the other, for things that translate over.
  
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• First, you must put his first, middle, and last name in the code above his picture.
  
• Please add the rest of the date of birth, not just the year. The month and the day, as well.
  
• Please change his powers. This is the combination that Piper has, and we're not allowing anyone to have the same combination (except the teacher who teaches the class, for obvious reasons). You can have one of them, just change the other.
  
• Add some more details about how he got his powers, and the attack on his parents. What happened?
  
• Tell us more about the training he had with temporal statis (if this is the power you choose to keep), was it with his mom? When did it start? If you keep the molecular combustion, tell us who he hurt - and how, and the circumstances around it.
  
• You can talk about his hair in his overall appearance, but it's not really a 'facial feature' (nose, chin, eyes, cheeks, lips, facial shape, etc). Also, you said his hair was chocolate brown, but in the photo it is blonde. Please use the PB you choose, to describe your character. Try to write more about his overall appearance. Describe him completely. This helps us to see how well you will be able to use this literary device when you write in the game.
  
• If you can, write more than three sentences about his style.
  
• The personality section need to be beefed up considerably. For each strength and weakness, explain about it. Tell the story of why, and how this affects their life. Not just a few words. In the examples below, you can see people picked one word, and then spent a paragraph explaining the weakness/strength/etc.
  
• Definitely expand significantly on the goal, fears, weakness, secret, and worst memory, happiest memory. We need to know all the details, not just a very short one sentence answer. Especially when you talk about his parents dying in front of his eyes? What happened? What was the circumstance?
  
• Please separate the paragraphs with a space between them. Hit enter twice when you go to a new paragraph. Add one more paragraph on his overall personality, and beef up the paragraphs you have. A good paragraph is between 6-10 sentences, and your paragraphs here have 2-3 sentences. Also, just as a general comment, you don't need to start every sentence with his name. Change it up a little bit, it makes it less monotonous to read.
  
• Make sure to note what level class he is in. As a Freshman he would be in all level 1 (I in roman numerals) classes.
  
• Definitely talk more about his favorite and worst classes, and why. We would like to see more than one sentence there.
  
• Don't forget to put his hometown.
  
• I'm not really sure it's kosher for a 13 year old to have a child. A sibling, yes - but not a child.
  
• This history is also much too short for the things you have set up in his bio so far. Also, please separate the paragraphs, as mentioned before. The book "Charmed and Dangerous" would not exists in this world for several reasons. 1st, it's set in 1991, and even in RL, Charmed did not exist until 1999. Also, this is the world of Charmed, as told in the book. There would not be a book about the Charmed Ones in that fashion, just like there wasn't in the show. Although the police don't know what happened to his parents, we need to know the story. You need to write that out. Also, another general comment, not ever sentence needs to end with an exclamation point. The more you use it, the less it has the meaning it should.
  
• You have a very good outline here, but you need to really beef it up a lot in order to be accepted. Please take a look at these examples, to see what we're looking for! Once you edit it again, we'll take another look.
  
• good examples: donovan hale, damia nichols, nora-lynn spencer
  

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[Sophea Morton]

Just a little note from me your picture is of Lloyd Daniel's not Joe McElderry